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I was writing in my journal and then i looked over what I was writing. I realized that it was a poem. For some of you who dont believe in god or have a different god, please dont find this offensive. I took up this new idea. I think that emotions feed the writer’s soul, emotion gives everyone the passion to write. I encourage this fully!
My heart hurts
All the people I trust
Cannot be trusted
They leak out my secrets
Though I know they can’t help it.
It makes me wonder
Who can I trust?
Who will not tell the world?
There is only one
Who can keep these secrets
The tempting darkness of my life
The secrets that will give you a thirst
A thirst to tell
To betray
Whether you want to
Or not
God is the only person
In whom I can trust
To keep the secrets
That lie in my heart
There is an interesting saying. It is “I trust everyone! It is the devil inside them that I don’t trust” I think that is a perfect phrase to go along with this poem.
Hey, Aron from cloakofwords here.
I have to see this is a great poem - I’ve been thinking about much of the same things (namely, trust) lately, although my views differ slightly. I might write a reply poem
Comment by Aron 03.23.08 @ 2:43 pmHey, nice peom!! This is really nice. When I read this I somehoe felt the same.
This poem somehow just got e on some spot, a real deep one. I could feel it so hard and trust me I cried ok!!
This is really nice!
Comment by ataya 03.24.08 @ 12:01 pmCool poem. I love your title..it suits well with the poem. I like the line: The secrets that will give you a thirst. =D
Comment by nabila 03.29.08 @ 8:09 amHey Natasha, my name’s Yura.
Comment by Yura 05.06.08 @ 7:19 amI really liked this poem.. I’m not much of a poet or good at writing poems, but I think it’s amazing how your journal just ended up being such a profound poem. I agree that it’s hard to trust people in the world, but God is always there.. along with my family of course.
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